Wednesday, January 16, 1952. THE COLLEGE NEWS Page Five Counterpoint Review Stirs Writer’s Comment Continued from Page 2 point) would not suffer from the indication of deletions which 1 have suggested, while the poem—~ that of the authors’ intention, at least,—suffers seriously without it. I have chosen to examine Mr.|} Berthoff’s criticism of “Beethov- en” because, to me, it is a flagrant example of the type of criticism which can be most harmtul to a college magazine, and because I am better qualified to discuss my own work than to discuss that of Uuuers sn Wae Winter Counterpoint. aliuerehy IM Criticism are Clarity, anu oObjecvlvity. ‘100 a.eyueluly this review tails to luiccy vue requirements. 1 exempli- 4y my point im the criticism of ~peevunoven.” Mr, Berthott men- ions “aeadwood” but is never spe- ciuc enough to explain why he cuusiders 1t $0; he Goes not tell us What 10 18 that he 1s attacking (clar- luy). anstead, raising the hatchet uarkly, he suddenly becomes cre- avtlve and carves out a little poem oc his own. ‘This might be in- structive were he to enlighten us on its merits and draw a valid comparison to the original effort. As 1t 18, he takes the reader on an excursion which, in its present context, is vague and pointless (coherence and objectivity). Cumereuce, Supercilious Tone Another fault of this sort ot criticism lies in its tone, which is too often pompous, condescending, supercilious or silly; in any case, renecting lack of respect for the only creative magazine on campus, the magazine which, whatever its faults (some of which are indubi- ably retiections of conditions be- yond our control or even our ap- prehension), is the vehicle of ex- pression here for everyone who nas the desire to transmit some- thing of himself onto paper. It is the business of the reviewer of sucn a magazine, which can im- prove only through wider reader and contributor interest, to be nonest, but to be constructive as well, It is easy to damn (“... its vwuoughts are fatally satisfied . .. ana its readers ... are liable unemseives not to give a hoot.”), put it is the harder and better part, even while exposing the de- iects, to point out, equally spe- cifically, the existent and poten- tial good. If one compares this is- sue of Counterpoint with the two immediately preceding, one may conclude that the authors of the most recent issue are (with certain exceptions) striving for a less ab- struse, less cluttered, and simpler quality of expression. Perhaps new faults have developed in the attempt to get rid of the old. But this very attempt is a proof of that interest, the lack of which Mr. Berthoff decries: an “interest in the work of writing.” At the moment, this interest in the work of writing may be mere- ly latent, It is certain that it needs encouragement and motiva- tion, neither of which is likely to be found in a review which ranges from the general to the picayune but never truly finds the heart of the matter or seizes on the in- dividual composition as a whole. It takes no extra space to do a proper job, if space is an object; it simply requires organization, which is another name for per- spective. I do not imply that Counterpoint stands or falls on the nature of the review. But I hold that the review, at its best, no matter what it has to say, can be one source of support and in- spiration to the magazine. Coun- terpoint needs more constructive reviews. _ Sincerely, Diana Forbes, ’54 ENGAGEMENTS Miss Deborah S. Austin, to Mr. Richard G. Bozorth. Lynne Antoinette Leach, ’53, to Edward Windell. Constance Logan, ’52, to David Eaton, Jr. All Balloting Requires Attention, Consideration Continued from Page 1 alone. If the class committee’s functions were limited, the reports would be read to a joint meeting of the three class nominating com- mittees who would vote together on the slates to be presented to the classes. This suggestion was brought up at severai hall meet- ings anc is an attempt to mini- mize the strong influence of the class on the nominations. Questions four and five are self- | expianatory. The voter is asked whether she thinks the first Jun-' .or and Sophomore members to Undergrad should be college-elect-| ed as at present or should be class-elected. There was strong -eeling in some of the hall meet: | .ngs that the number of college zlections should be cut, but these -wo elections were the only ones which any substantial group of yeople thought could be eliminated. | Tne hall meetings produced a great number of suggestions for smproving the elections which do aot appear on the ballot becaust -hey do not require any constitu uonal change. No matter how th voting turns out on Thursday the .ollowing improvements, among sthers, will be undertaken: an ei .ort wili be made to make the re yorts mvre objective, more than. .our people will be interviewed 1. aecessary, blank ballots will prob: wbly be used,*ra tea will be held tc ntroduce the candidates and pub. ucity will be improved. Other sug gestions are still welcome. No constitutional changes can bi nadé without the consent of two hirds of the entire college, so ev ry vote on Thursday is impor. int. Think about the issues, every ody, try to vote intelligently, bu. whatever you do, please vote. BALLOT ON ELECTION PROCEDURE Read this ballot carefully! once under every question. PREFERENTIAL ORDER 1. [] I am in favor of class pref- erential listing of candidates in some form. { ] I am opposed to class pref- erential listing of candidates in any form. 2. If preferential order is retained: { ] I am in favor of class pref- erential listing of candidates on the ballots. {[] I am in favor of stating class preferential listing of candidates the reports, but using blank ballots. NOMINATING COMMITTEE 3. [J] I am in favor of the pres- ent functions of the class nominating committee; i.e., drawing up reports and nar- rowing the slate to be pre- sented to the class. I am in favor of limiting the function of the class nominating committee to the drawing up of reports and having the three-class nom- inating committees together narrow the slate to be pre- sented to the class. POSSIBLE REDUCTIONS IN THE NUMBER OF ALL-COLLEGE ELECTIONS 4. [] I am in favor of the pres- ent system whereby the First Junior Member to Un- grad (who runs the Under- grad dances) is_ college- elected. I am in favor of having the First Junior Member to Undergrad elected by her class. 5. [] I am in favg@ of the pres- ent system whereby the First Sophomore member to Undergrad is college-elected. I am in favor of having the first Sophomore member to Undergrad elected by her Vote [] CJ LJ class. sy Liven Up Your Wardrobe with Some New SPRING PRINTS from MARTIE’S Open Meeting Produces Suggestions for Saving Continued from Page 1 about $2.000 per year. If the hall manager could know by Thursday all the students who are leaving college for a weekend, $3,000 would be saved. With a shitt in our private electricity system to a gen- eral system, rates would be lower- ed, but the cost of the change would counterbalance the immedi- ate saving. Miss McBride closed the meeting stating that the problem of ‘Costs and Fees” is both a long-term and a short-term one. There is no cri- sis of bankruptcy at present, but acticn must be taken immediately to decrease the deficit and increase professorial salaries, to make Continued on Page 6, Col. 5 SPORTS by Emmy Cadwalader ’53. The Fencing Varsity sent fow entries to the Amateur Fencer’s League of America last Wednes- day, January 9. The Bryn Maw. grovp consisted of Maggie Glenn Lillian Smith, Caroline Morgan and Joyce Greer (captain). The other cojleges also competing werc the University of Pennsylvania Tyler Art School, and the York W.M.C.A. Bryn Mawr should be very prow of her fencers, because they did a beautiful job at their first meet of the season. Maggie Glenn and Caroline Morgan both qualified for the fina!s, and the grand triumph of the evening was when Caroline Morgan placed first for the whole meet. With this good start it looks very much as if the coming season will be a promising one. Woodward Book Given At Library Friends Tea Continued from Page 1 teen months, the entire Severn lection of her father had been returned, with the climactic acqui- .uon ot the last by her own ef- orts. At tea after the “Indiscretions”, he audience examined the Dictien- ary and pictures, and in the midst of it all ,the gift of a translation of The Divine Comedy was an- anounced. This hook, given by Mrs. Woodward, had belonged to Quita, and was the Nonesuch Press editiun with illustrations from Botticelli. It. will be in the Quita Woodward Memorial Room, and the rest of the gifts of the Friends of the Library will be on display in the Rare Book Room. 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